class

The last class was very beneficial to me. I got so many good ideas to improve my narrative story. I finished it tonight and I believe it improved a lot. It's still very, but it has a smaller size that it used to be. I believe using dialog to describe the character makes everything easier. 
The professor gave me some good ideas for my conflict and I decided to change about 70% of the story. So I had to rewrite almost everything, but keeping the characters and the science of the story.